Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


Fear, Paranoia, Disgust and Hatred all at once I never thought one man could have all these feelings towards himself . But he can because in this cold, dark void of a cave I am now that one man that feels every negative emotion bombarding him all at one time.

I've been crying ever since I found out who it was I killed, the thought of myself slaughtering Albert sickens, saddens and torments me with every waking moment. I sometimes see into his past thoughts, I don't know how and I don't know why but I see his past life, his life was so simple…so peaceful.
He sometimes invades my head and torments my thoughts, encourages me to always remember what I did, so I would never stop crying, I hear his voice, his screams…his footsteps??
I've never heard his footsteps before! They're getting closer…voices!? Whispers! But these voices sound…familiar, someone demanding…no, Ordering! A light shines onto the wall in front of me, it can't be?! They've found me!

This must be a sign, I cannot escape what I have done, I have to accept responsibility for my actions and my punishment, I hear the clicking of the guns, the deepness of his breath, I could swear I could feel his cold dark stare falling upon me…he hesitates…why prolong my sentence? If this is what must be done. Then…then…
:iconthe-legend-of-freaks:

Author's Comments

a preview for chapter 8. i shall have it up soon hopefully

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconpapaskleinerliebling:
....

:wow: I think this is actually the best part of the bestest story I have read....

Wow! Don't know why but this touches me the most. Actually a GUY WITH feelings! I am amazed!

:worship:

--
It's all a question of Style.

But it should be at least SMOKIN' SICK!!!
:iconthe-legend-of-freaks:
really? this is only and opening paragraph.
But if you like it. then that's good enough for me =]

honestly your comment is the only one i care about. :iconfurryglompplz:

--
デビッド
Why so Serious?
Some people say I have a heart of gold, others say I have a heart of stone. But they are wrong, I have the heart of a Dragon.
:iconcaz1350:
Awh apparently it's not even worth commenting if you've already got the only one you care about ):

--
:flaguk: I'm British :flaguk:
:iconpapaskleinerliebling:
Yeah really!! I know it's just a teaser. That's why I am sad. I can't read your story but when I will finally be back...I can read tons of new chapters ^^


Awww!! You are so sweet!

--
It's all a question of Style.

But it should be at least SMOKIN' SICK!!!
:iconthe-legend-of-freaks:
Thank you very much Meena =)
:iconfurryglompplz:
and i'll send them in notes for you =]

--
デビッド
Why so Serious?
Some people say I have a heart of gold, others say I have a heart of stone. But they are wrong, I have the heart of a Dragon.
:iconthe-legend-of-freaks:
Awwh Charny you;re like my older sister so of course you mean something to me aswell ^_^ :hug:

--
デビッド
Why so Serious?
Some people say I have a heart of gold, others say I have a heart of stone. But they are wrong, I have the heart of a Dragon.

Details

November 11
1.5 KB

Statistics

6
1 [who?]
14 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map